"Loop" (2020)
- bucky
- Mar 13, 2024
- 2 min read
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Six-foot tall, neon-pink letters illuminated the drizzly streets of downtown Brooklyn. The sign audibly buzzed, an irritating noise partially drowned out by the hum of electric traffic ambulating through wet streets. Everything seemed to have a digital haze to it, from the vehicles and nightclubs, to the fifty-foot advertisements plastered on crumbling buildings, right down to the quietly clicking fingers of the detective stood before the filthy establishment.ā£
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Inside one coat pocket, the enhanced detective thumbed at a gaudy, magenta matchbook. He hated this goddamn bar.ā£
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Ducking beneath yellow police tape, Detective Keaton Crane reluctantly stepped inside. Amber-coloured irises scanned the grimy interior, an internal system logging notes ā a sticky patch of floor here, peeling wallpaper there, a blood splatter decorating the chrome silver bar just ahead. The place was a dive at the best of times, but it sank to Atlantean levels when moonlighting as a gory crime scene.ā£
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āWho invited the tinhead!?ā ā£
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Hollidayās brash tone barrelled across the room, punctuating the slur with a cocksure smarminess that made Crane wince. Being the chief of police, the tactless oaf was a constant presence at crime scenes around the city, which made Craneās job infinitely more difficult ā the guy was an idiot at best, and an obstructive, confrontational bigot at worst. ā£
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āEvening, Holliday.ā The words left Craneās lips in a terse, formal greeting, digital eyes already back on the corners and curves of the room. Each shadowy edge hid a wealth of information, evidence that the boorish idiot ahead of him could never hope to locate alone.ā£
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āYou lookinā for stripper panties with those things, eh Crank?ā ā£
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With a single turn away from Holliday, Craneās blacklight feature illuminated smeared fluid crudely painted along the back wall. A huge, meandering symbol decorated the peeling wallpaper, each painted edge ragged with frantic swipes, an almighty lemniscate dripped neonā the universal symbol for šš£ššš£šš©š®.
Originally written and shared as part of Verbuary 2020: https://tinyurl.com/jbftuha8
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